QUESTION 14 - A story about music - NAPLAN Grade 5

Many people listen to music to relax and some listen to music to feel energised. Write a story about a song or a piece of music. How did this piece of music make you feel? Remember to include a main event and plan out your story.

My favourite song
by Akeek for K

I all started when my parents bought a piano for me because I really liked classical music, some makes me dance and some calms me down. It was an electric one with lots of voices and songs. First of all, I listened to the songs built into it. I listened to them one by one. When I played number 011 or 012, my mum thought it sounded like Rondo Alla Turca, short name, Turkish March, she played it when she was young. My mum played it for me and it thought it sounded nice, so I attempted playing it.

After practicing for 371 days, I could play it like a professional, and it was my favorite song. I like it because it makes me dance when I am in a good mood and calms me down when I am stressed.


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